Wow. That one's impressive. *rolls eyes* But I think it has a nice affect. Factoid! The name of this little doujin was originally going to be 'Descent of the Royalty', as Hime and Ichigo (King and Princess) fall out and descend into darkness, her into fear and him into... what ever it is he's into. But at a lucky mistake, it was put down as 'Dissent of the Royalty', dissent as in argument. Which I guess fits, seeing as this whole thing corresponds to the age old argument of Ulquihime or Ichihime. (yes the pairings are age old. As of now.)
Oh thank you! I'm currently working on another oneshot, though it's most definitely Ichihime...I think.XD And I can confidently say that it's MUCH better than this.